its too fruityloopy
You used too much of the speech synth (especially sice you didnt make them say something new!)The other synths and their melodies were good though.
In fruityloops, if you go under "misc" in the chanel settings there is a button that says "cut itself". That will clean up your melodies a lot, makeing the whole track more clear.
Thanks for the tip m8!
That really is your best yet
All you did really was add one effect.
I know this was my first submission
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